HOMEWORK

The new club, besides my apartment, has brought with it quite many troubles since it built and I am really frustrated.Firstly, the music is too loud to keep myself working on my paper. I could stay at my bedroom listening to some music and studying a month ago. However, with the club's music, it is impossible to learn in my room. What's more, this club's quitting time is too late. I used to go to sleep at 11pm to keep efficient daytime. But I can't keep my sleeping schedule anymore because the close time is 2am which disturbs my sleeping time. Last but not least, various individuals could lead to safety issues. Campus should be a place filled with scholars, students and researchers as before. Nowadays, things have changed including unfamiliar persons coming because of the club.

Comparative Essay

compare-similar; contrast-different

Exercise: Would you prefer to marry someone you love or someone loving you?

Comparing -- period

--when occur

--what happened or changed

--people's work

--relationships

--value

--governments

--important people involved

--cause/ consequence/ later on

Comparing-- ideas

--about what

--originate time

--who create

--who use/ defend

--center focus

--apply to situations

--which more plausible

--scope broad

--evidence

Comparing-- art/ writing

--titles

--depict what

--mood

--form

--who create

--why be created

Comparing-- people

--from

--anthropologic characters: gender/ race/ class/ age

--known for

--relationship

--be like

--do what

--believe

--interesting/ intriguing

 NOTICE YOUR PURPOSE

Both WWI and WWII direct to large quantities of victims.

OUTLINE--Patterners

Block Format

Point-by point format 

Common Linguistic features

A slightly/ a little/ a bit/ not much

More or less

Problems_

notice gramma

notice structure